
Mad Cyb0rg

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Ok, so, our English class did not get to write any horror stories for Halloween (I hate her soooo much, says I can't even write a real sentence.) But all the other English II classes did. So, I asked a friend if he'd give his teacher my story if I wrote one. He said sure. So, here it is, one of my longer horror stories.
The Deal
The night was black and humid, the only light coming from the street lamps towering over the road. Thick rain drops slapped the windshield, sounding off their soothing taps. The slick and soaking streets were bare of all life; except for Travis Sweeney and his fire engine red Oldsmobile. The slender man pushed his fogged up, horn rimmed glasses back up his nose, keeping his eyes locked onto the road. Normally, Travis was a calm man, and would never be speeding down the slippery road like he was, but tonight was different. He had left his cramp office early without warning, for he had gotten a call from his wife that she was leaving him for another man. Donna claims that he’s not there for her, that he’s so built up on his crappy job that it seems it’s all he wants for his life. Travis took all of the trouble she gave him before but this was the final straw. She told him that she was packing the bags and she would be leaving in an hour. It only takes Travis half an hour to get home. He stared down the road like an enemy keeping him further from his ultimate goal. Travis was completely oblivious to his surroundings, until beside him he saw a flash of red that illuminated the car. His eyes widened as they twitched from the figure to the road. Sitting beside him, smoking a thick cigar and twitching its tail, was what looked like to be the devil himself in a three piece suit. “What’s got you shaking? What’s got you nervous, Mr. Sweeney?” The devil pushed his black glasses to the top of his head, hooking them on top of his cracked horns. He turned towards Travis and smiled his black toothed grin, blowing smoke rings into his face. “Something’s wrong with you Sweeney. Go ahead and tell me, I’m your buddy.” Travis swallowed hard as a cold sweat began to graze his skin. His mind fluttered at what was going on, but hallucination or not it still scared him to the bone. The devil chuckled and sucked in his cigar, creating a bright trail of cinder to reveal his features. The creature’s nose was pointed at the end of the curved bridge, and his cheeks were sucked in like he was suffering from starvation. His dark smile consisted of jagged teeth and a black, cracked tongue which was stuck out whenever he spoke. The goatee on his chin was greasy and matted; Travis could have sworn he saw a maggot or two crawling inside. Even with all of these gruesome features, the most frightening thing about the demon were his eyes: ghost white with a tiny black pupil in the center and veins appearing to bulge out from them. Travis didn’t dare look directly into the monster’s face, half thinking that he’d turn to stone. “M-my wife, or ex-wife, is leaving me for someone else.” Mr. Sweeney’s voice was shaky and uncertain. He realized his mistake when the devil started to chuckle. “I’m so sorry Mr. Sweeney, but hey, what are you going to do, huh?” the demon wrapped his charred tongue around the blunt cigar, curling it into his mouth he began to chew and eventually swallow, “I mean, relationships never last. It’s just a fact of life, Travis. Though, when it does happen, it’s pretty heart breaking, don’t you think?” Satan quirked a brow and leaned closer to Travis, causing the terrified man to almost lose control of the vehicle. “But heart broken isn’t what you’re feeling right now is it, Mr. Sweeney?” the monster said with a grin and wet cigar soot spitting from his lips. “Um, well,” Travis closed his eyes and took a deep breath, he felt himself becoming more comfortable for some reason, “I’m mostly mad at the moment.” “And why is that?” “Because of everything I did for her: the house, the jewelry, everything, she just decides that I haven’t been good to her. I’ve spent my life making sure she was happy, that she had everything she wanted, and this is how she repays me? It’s bull and she knows it.” Satan leaned the seat all the way back while he propped his feet up on the dash board of the car, watching the rain come down almost twice as hard. The large buildings of the downtown area began to shrink and turn into apartments and shops. They would be at the house in less than twelve minutes. “What are you going to do when you get there?” Travis bit his lip and pushed his glasses back up, “I-I hadn’t thought about it much, probably just argue.” Satan laughed loudly and kicked the dash board, Travis would see small flames spurting from the manic creatures mouth. “Argue? ARGUE? Come on Travis, honestly? You have all this hatred bottled up inside and all you’re going to do is argue? Look, you can’t just bottle anger inside, trust me, I should know.” He laughed again, this time hacking up black tar onto the windshield, “Tell you what, since I like you, I’m going to help you out. I can tell what you really want to do, but you’re just too afraid to. So, you do your job, get all that rage out, and I’ll take care of the rest.” He smiled at Travis with a frightening grin, but Mr. Sweeney felt, somehow, happy. For a smile arched around his face also. “See? That’s the spirit Sweeney old boy. I’ll just be taking my leave now.” The devil reached for the door handle and was about to open it before he turned around and snapped his fingers. “Oh damn, I almost forgot.” He reached out his hand, “Got to shake on it, company policy.” Without thinking before acting, Travis reached out and shook Satan’s hand, only to reel back in pain with the sight of blood dripping down his palm. “Adios, bub.” The devil laughed as he opened the car door and jumped out, leaving Travis to watch as his body hit the road and the sounds of bones shattering filled his ears. Though, Travis did not slow down but merely looked in the rearview mirror, to see nothing. He would remain silent until he walked through the door of his two story house five minutes later. Donna’s car was still in the driveway with at least five bags stuffed in the back on the Corvette. Travis shut off the engine and glided into the pathway, getting out and leaving the door open. He would grab his key and open the front door slowly and enter the living room with this strange confidence that was overpowering him. The living room would seem to be something out of a mansion. It was complete with a roaring fireplace, trophies atop the mantle, beautiful foreign rugs, and wall to wall glazed mahogany wood. Travis would soon appear in the kitchen and grab the largest knife he could find. Looking at his eyes in the blade made him smile. He would slowly walk back into the living room to see Donna at the top of the stairs with a ghost pale face.
She quickly dropped the suitcases in her hands and ran towards the bedrooms with Travis climbing over the clothes and stepping onto a few pictures that she had packed. “Come here darling, I just want to talk.” Donna slammed the bedroom door in his face, leaving blood oozing from his broken nose. He grabbed for the handle and jiggled it wildly, growling at his frustration when he realized it was locked. The crazed man began stabbing at the door in blind rage until he heard a voice in his head, “Try the door again.” Travis would find the door unlocked and slowly opening. He busted in to see Donna struggling to climb out of the window. He leaped at his dangling legs, sliding the knife through her calve while she screamed and cried. “How could you do this to me? Why would you? WHY?” With all his might, Travis pulled her from the window, her head getting a huge gash in the process, and tossed her onto the bed before coming down with the knife. Her screams became gurgles as blood filled her throat, and thirty-four stabs and a gruesome mess later, she was dead. Travis was beat red with sweat and blood covering his body and clothes. He wiped the saliva from his mouth while he breathed the fire from his lungs. The knife hit the bed and he stood watching his back, waiting for the stranger to come and finish the job. “Where are you? Where the hell are you? I’m done! Take her away!” Mr. Sweeney spun around to the window, franticly looking outside for a car, or a man in a suit walking down the street. His gritted teeth jutted open into a bloody curdling howl from a sharp pain in his back and no feeling at all in his legs. Travis hit the floor with a thud, and looked upward to see Donna. “What is this? WHAT IS THIS!” Travis began to tear up and cry, “You’re dead! You are damn DEAD!” Donna gritted her teeth and shoved Travis to the ground, pulling out the knife she stabbed it into his eye, killing him instantly. Then all was black. “Hmm, yeah, I’m sorry about that.” Out of the blackness from nowhere walked Satan in his suit, the orange glow from the cigar the only light. “You said, I’d be able to kill her!” “Well you did, right?” “No! No! She got back up! She killed me!” Satan laughed and walked circles around Travis, blowing burning smoke into his face. “Should have been more specific with you’re deal. Should have said she wasn’t allowed to make one.” He grinned and flicked the cigar into Travis’s face, which it then burst into flames, searing his skin. “What? You helped her? Why?” Travis was crying and holding his scarred face, not knowing what was to come. “Nothing personal my friend, just business; there was no way I was going to pass up a two for one deal, I mean come on.” Travis stared up at Satan like a lost child, frightened and alone. “Don’t worry, you’ll be taken well care of.” The eternal darkness was lit up by boiling fire and the scent of brimstone. Travis, with his paralyzed legs and blinded eyes, could only hear the screams of torment from the souls of damnation and feel the fire charring his flesh. “Oh no, oh God no, please! Please God!” The devil raised his hand to his pointed ear and looked upward, shaking his head and sucking on his cigar, “No God here.”
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