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I seriously have to applaude both Lisette and Laelia for their amazing writing in "Meet Arturo." There is a lot of great dialogue and the whole scene is surprisingly smooth. Incorporating simple Spanish phrases to set the tone, the scene, and the nationality is great and you both didn't over do any of it.
Anyways, I was going to make another Captain. Hail Capitan :D And we are under raid.....so I was wondering if y'all wanted to have any action in it. Cause I may dispatch a rider. Also, with the whole Carlone dad type of thing....we could have him at the fort and Elaine (right?) could be worrying about him during the raid, thus increasing the tension.
Oh yeah, as a whole, the scene with the govenor and the maid was almost like a dance. Quite impressive. Impressive indeed. :mellow: -_o :o :D
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