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Nesirae
Posted: Apr 6 2006, 11:00 PM


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that hasn't been lost...
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EDIT: Before anyone asks... These poems are all a part of me... Each one shows part of my soul. I would ask that no one mock them. Please.

-Love's Plea-
Open thine eyes, Child of nature
Be one with yourself and all around
Hear my voice and crawl on all fours
Till the time comes to walk and then to run
Death is outside, Death is inside
Angels will bless your soul
Daemons will corrupt it
Life is too short to love
Death is swift and painless
Life is slow and painful
The battle has yet to be won
The battle for the human soul
Between the Angels and the Daemons
One must choose, the side of Good or the side of Evil
Learn to live and to love

-Vampire's Proposal-
Darkness consumes my soul,
whilst your's basks in the Light.
If we intertwine Light and Shadow,
Our souls will become one
Forevermore.
We shall not separate,
For Shadow needs the Light,
And Light needs the Darkness,
They need one another as we do,
To stay entwined
Forevermore

-Ring-
I still wear the ring that used to symbolize our love,
A band of silver on a hand of bone with a fleshy glove.
The ring reminds me of a time long past,
A time not meant to be.
How I wish to turn back the hands of time,
To a time you loved me.
But now I see that time is not to come.
My heart is dead and cold.
Only things keeping me alive are false hopes, dreams.
I'm falling to a place cold and black.
I still love you although you do not return the feeling.
I still wear the ring.
A silver band on a hand of bone.

-Wolf-
You see me as I am. But what am I?
Am I not a man?
Who bleeds, cries and dies like other men?
Or am I a wolf?
Proud, Deadly, Mysterious as the shadow itself.
I ask you. What do you see me as?
Man or Wolf in Man's skin.
I am neither Man, nor Wolf. I am a Shadow.
I am who I want to be, Master of my own Fate.
So I ask you again. What do you see me as?
Man, or Wolf?

-Goodbye-
When you were my life
You gave me something to live for,
But now your gone and you took my sanity
along with everything I loved.
I still Love thee, Negru Inger.
You cant stand me,
Or the sight of my face.
But you still haunt my dreams.
Beautiful Queen...
This is where I say "Goodbye"
This is where my story ends.
If there's one thing I learned from life.
It's that it gets you in the end.
Everywhere I go I see your face.
Every sound I hear is the sound of your voice.
I try hating you but it only makes it worse.
I always end up hating myself.
Goodbye, my friend.

-Angel of the Night-
I love thee, with all my now beating heart.
My heart and soul laid dead and black, cold and dark,
Until you came into my Life.
You taught my heart love
and shown my sorrow filled soul compassion.
It is to you I owe my life, my Angel.
and it is to you I give my Love, my Heart and my Soul.
My Angel, your beauty is unmatched by the heavens
The Night wraps soft velvety darkness around me,
It feels like your arms, reaching for me.
The moon shines with the radiance of your smile.
My Love, My Life, My Angel of the Night.

-Fate's Whisperings-
Fate Whispers words of deceit
As I lay under Winter's Ghostly footprints
As I walk, Immune to Earth's Frozen pain
Fate Whispers words of pain
As I lay above Summer's heating breath
As I walk, Subject to Earth's Fiery passion
Fate Whispers words of passion
As I lay next to Autumn's falling fingertips
As I walk with Earth's Chilling malice
Fate Whispers words of malice
As I lay with Spring's watchful eyes
As I walk near Earth's Warm deceit
Fate Whispers...

-Red as Blood-
Behind the mirrors that are my eyes
Lies my world
Darkened storm clouds occupy the sky.
While Rain, Red as Blood, falls
The Violet roses' beauty fills the air.
My world hides the truth that lay beyond
Beyond my Dark clouds and my sanctuary.
The Dragons of Shadow and Blood rule there,
While Rain, Red as Blood, falls.

-Rose in the Rain-
Darkened words race through my thoughts
While my Heart is withering to dust.
I'm crushing my heart, my soul
All for you, the Love of my life long past.
I cannot sleep I cannot Think
I cannot find reflections in these days.
There are no flowers, All burned and black
There'll be no Angels, Gracing my life
Six feet deep is the incision
in my heart, that bar less Prison
Cold was my soul
Untold was the pain
I faced when you left me
A Rose in the Rain

-Pain-
Why must I live this lonely life?
Dark God, Help me in life, I need your Guidance.
Guidance in life, Guidance in pain.
Guidance in knowledge, Guidance in Death.
Pain and suffering have become my closest friends.
My heart is dead and cracked,
never to open and breathe.
Pain, My friend, Why must you torture me so?
Suffering, My friend, Why must you torture me so?

-My Love-
My love for you is stronger than the winds of Olympus,
The mountain of the Gods.
My love for you is stronger than the defenses of Valhalla,
The hall of slain heroes.
My love for you burns with more force than the fires of The 9th layer,
of Hell.
My love for you is indescribable...
I truly Love you with all my beating heart..
And my love for you will always burn bright..
Forever...

-Tears-
Tears of blood fall from my eyes
You say I don't see your own.
You don't see mine thus assume
I have none.
I regret. I pain. I have remorse.
I have hurt you. I have torn you.
My life is nothing. I have pained you.
The one I loved, The one who loved me.
I wish to turn back the hands of time.
I wish to repent. Dear gods shall I repent?
Tears of silver fall from my eyes.

-Hope-
She looks to the skies,
walking over winter's land,
Hope shining in her lovely eyes.
Walking with black ribbon in hand.
Her love, time denies,
He travels the waste land.
For her he walks the earth,
Too hold her in his arm,
Before the hearth.
For he keeps her warm,
As they watch the birth.
They walk under the skies,
Across the snowy land.
Love in thier eyes,
Walking hand in hand.
They, then realize,
their hope embodies the land.

-Ghost-
I'm a Ghost in the snow.
Never finding warmth
I have no life,
I have no soul.
I'm damaged, and broken.
Nothing can fix me.
But I need you to try.
Help this Ghost.
Melt the snow.

-Beautiful Dragon-
Beautiful Dragon,
You've given this Shadow everything.
You've given this Shadow form.
The Shade lives for you
And will die for you.
You are his life, his love.
He cherishes everything about you.
He will always adore you.
Beautiful Dragon.
You've given me everything.
You've given me form.

-Dark Heart-
I sit here,
Sanity locked away.
I'm afraid to be alone.
Yet alone I am.
You can see my anger
You can feel my pain.
You can see the torment
Driving me insane.
Dark Heart, end my suffering.
If you can forgive me
Then maybe I'll learn to forgive
myself.
Darling Heart...

-Untitled-
Lost in a world of doubt and deception,
Shadows block the light, until you came.
You shine light that cuts through the darkness
like a knife through flesh.
Blood seeps from the shadows
Blood tainted by darkness.
My own liquid of life...
Heal my wounds, Take away my pain.
I shall do the same for you.
My rozeta frumos.
My inger frumos.
Ultimately...
Te iubesc, Truly with all my heart.
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Kouyang
Posted: Apr 7 2006, 09:25 AM


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yaay poems!

-"Love'sPlea"
I sat and thought about this one, made me think a bit!: 'Life is too short to love' but at the end: 'Learn to live and love' >.< dam! I'm screwed, I'm slow learner! ; ;

-"Vampire's Probosal"
Yin&Yang

-"Ring"
made me cry a little. (idk why lol)

-"Wolf"
The deep thoughts of a werewolf, My fav!

-"Good Bye"
'Negru Inger' Romanian...?

-"Angel of the Night"
Stuff Vin would tell me heehee <3

-"Fate's Whisperings
This one earns the full quote!

"Fate Whispers words of deceit
As I lay under Winter's Ghostly footprints
As I walk, Immune to Earth's Frozen pain
Fate Whispers words of pain
As I lay above Summer's heating breath
As I walk, Subject to Earth's Fiery passion
Fate Whispers words of passion
As I lay next to Autumn's falling fingertips
As I walk with Earth's Chilling malice
Fate Whispers words of malice
As I lay with Spring's watchful eyes
As I walk near Earth's Warm deceit
Fate Whispers... " (deceit..)

*what?! you mean the world I live in is just a sugar coated topping of lies?! ;~; I think I need a moment alone now....
*hugs self in a corner* I really like this one! It describes the world of America in one paragraph! brilliance! </clap>

-"Red as Blood"
you really...REALLY like blood.. don't ya, Dracula?

-"Rose in the Rain"
awww.. sounds like he can't move on. again, sounds like Vin If I were to die.

-"Pain"
He needs to welcome Jesus in his life. (I'm not very religious thoug)

-"My Love"
I love this one muchyness! If only Vin can brush up on his poetic loveyness.. "There will be much fun, no leave you alone! you no talk for days! Me likey you rong time!"
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Nesirae
Posted: Apr 7 2006, 10:23 AM


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QUOTE (Kouyang @ Apr 7 2006, 01:25 AM)
-"Ring"
made me cry a little. (idk why lol)

-"Good Bye"
'Negru Inger' Romanian...?

-"Red as Blood"
you really...REALLY like blood.. don't ya, Dracula?

Ring: Written after my fiance left me...

Goodbye: Negru Inger, Angel Black in romanian, I need to fix it... should be "Inger Negru" = "Black Angel"

Red as Blood: I have a thing for Vampires ok? I am also diabetic so I see blood every day.

And "Fate's Whisperings" won me an award in a poetry contest. (only poem I've ever entered in a contest but still)
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SamusKnight2K
Posted: Apr 7 2006, 10:25 AM


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Umm... well, dark poems aren't really my thing but they're pretty good Nesirae! The ring one reminds me a little about Sair and his love for the Chi he once knew.

The ring reminds me of a time long past,
A time not meant to be.
How I wish to turn back the hands of time,
To a time you loved me.
But now I see that time is not to come.


The irony of that is Chi returned the ring Sair had given for their engagement to him. When I think about it, Sair should still have that ring too.
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tryn
Posted: Apr 7 2006, 04:37 PM


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Kwee~ I'm so happy you posted your stuff ^^. I loved reading the few I was sent on msn and it'a great to read em all at once *gives a gold star to her favorite Vampy*
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fairyoracle
Posted: Apr 7 2006, 05:34 PM


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These are great Nes.

I think my fav is the Ring it makes me cry. sad.gif

You are very talented and if anyone mocks you I'll bop them.

/hug biggrin.gif
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Nesirae
Posted: Apr 7 2006, 10:55 PM


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WHEE!! *puts the gold star on his forehead* (>',..,')> grr argh.

yay for boppin'!!
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Tattersail
  Posted: Apr 10 2006, 02:53 PM


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QUOTE (Nesirae @ Apr 7 2006, 12:00 AM)
EDIT: Before anyone asks... These poems are all a part of me... Each one shows part of my soul. I would ask that no one mock them. Please.

If it wouldn't be a part of your own essence, it wouldn't appeal to anyone. I think I've quoted it somewhere before but here it comes again anyway tongue.gif
"My words fly up, my thoughts remain below. Word without thought never to heaven go" Shakespeare smile.gif

Your poems ring with truth. Although I have to say with a few of them I couldn't quite find the flow/beat or it went off rhythm half way through. Then again, I can't look in to your head and hear the beat with which you would recite them smile.gif
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Kouyang
Posted: Apr 10 2006, 10:40 PM


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QUOTE (Nesirae @ Apr 6 2006, 11:00 PM)
EDIT: Before anyone asks... These poems are all a part of me... Each one shows part of my soul. I would ask that no one mock them. Please.




I'm not trying to mock you at all, just saying what I feel. But If anything I say seems offencive to you, you have permission to /slap me >.o
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Reia
Posted: Apr 16 2006, 01:30 AM


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Red as Blood really moves me.

You see, I'm a hemophobiac.
If I see blood that isn't my own, my fear is so great that I pass out and panic. I can handle theatrical and special effect blood...but real blood... even veins will mess with me.

That...makes me feel a bit woozy, but I really like it.
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Sulfig
Posted: Apr 16 2006, 01:36 AM


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I have not the paitence to read these...Except for the wolf one...I love wolves(sp? how do u spell wolves or wolfs!?!?) Heheheh
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Nesirae
Posted: Jun 18 2006, 04:48 AM


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I added a poem... written on 6-17-06 at about 9pm PST
-Tears-
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fairyoracle
Posted: Jun 18 2006, 02:55 PM


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sad poem but good Nes. sad.gif
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Nesirae
Posted: Oct 6 2006, 03:48 AM


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Added -Hope- Oct. 5th 8:48pm PST
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fairyoracle
Posted: Oct 6 2006, 04:07 AM


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/clap

I think this is one of my favorites that you've written. biggrin.gif
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