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|Posted by: Itachi Nov 15 2006, 09:48 AM|
| Name: Itachi Shinoba
Eye Colour: Black
Hair Colour: Black
Separated from the rest of the family since babyhood, Itachi Shinoba grew up in an orphanagy. The purpose of the cruel separation was to prevent all members of Shinoba clan from dying out should the other three be found by the Vladikhan.
Since early childhood, Itachi discovered that he possessed unusual talents, such as having perfect aim when playing dodgeball, being much faster and agile than the rest of the kids around him. When he became 10, he met his older brother, Raike, and joined him in his quest to avenge his family. Since then, he has been fighting alongside one of the only two remaining survivors of the Shinoba clan (the other one being himself).
Itachi didn't know his true name until he was found by his brother. One of the things his father had told Raike when passing away was the location of the particular orphanagy and to 'find Itachi, your younger brother'.
|Posted by: Alaska Nov 15 2006, 06:50 PM|
|[*Cough naruto spinoff totally unoriginal and bs because noone has any abilities like those cough*|
|Posted by: Cyber78 Nov 15 2006, 10:19 PM|
| *cough pirates are better cough*
*takes cough meds*
|Posted by: Roncas Nov 15 2006, 10:25 PM|
| seriously. this ninja shit is not going to flow right. You are a normal person no special powers or anything. As a vmpire yes you will have increade agility, strength and regeneration. As a human I will understand if you are a great marksman if you character was a hunter as a child and/or joined the military or police force. That is likely but something like "Oh I am a ninja I am born with special abilities." No. Not going to happen. And seeing as your characters are 15, 16 your skills are very limited as a sword fighter, martial artist. Now if I was going to create a melee character this is how it should be.
Backstory: As a child my parents pushed me into taking martial arts. At first I disliked it but after sticking to it I began to enjoy it and excell through my belts. I took several different variants of martial arts at 16 and equally excelled through them. I began learning using weapons with my martial arts and became very proficient. My master was proud of me and taught me some of the old ways yatta yatta.
Yoiu have to earn your abilities to a degree not natural pocess them...
|Posted by: Cyber78 Nov 15 2006, 10:38 PM|
| RAmen to that.
I've got to whole heartedly agree, there's no such thing as inheiriting skill. Some people might be a little bit stronger, a little bit taller, or a little less prone to certain diseases based on genetics, but you just don't inheirit skills. Those must be taught.
|Posted by: Roncas Nov 15 2006, 10:45 PM|
|Especially with the age that ya'lls characters are you would be exponetially less skilled than the older characters.|
|Posted by: Naruto X13 Nov 16 2006, 09:41 AM|
Is it just a typo, or did you deliberately include the word 'ramen' to mock us of creating japanese superhuman characters?
Do you even know what it is?
|Posted by: Naruto X13 Nov 16 2006, 09:45 AM|
So would it be okay if he changed the 'perfect aim' and 'much faster and agile' bits to 'better-than-average aim' and 'slightly faster and agile'?
Some people are born with more athletic bodies, you know...
|Posted by: Naruto X13 Nov 16 2006, 09:50 AM|
I agree. But I must point out the fact that we never said our characters are more skilled than yours. We merely stated that our characters are of ninja descent, which makes them faster and more agile compared to other kids of their age.
And what if Raike received special training from his parents from very early childhood? Wouldn't that make his physical prowess surpass an average person's?
|Posted by: Naruto X13 Nov 16 2006, 10:01 AM|
Which abilities do you mean? The last time I checked, Itachi didn't give his character any special abilities. As I mentioned previously, he just said that Itachi Shinoba has good aim, can run faster and is more agile than other kids of his age.
I would understand if you had posted that in the 'Raike Shinoba' topic, where I said Raike could create illusions of himself and climb cliffs without needing footholds (this is starting to sound lame even to me, I apologise once again for posting such bullshit).
|Posted by: Cyber78 Nov 16 2006, 08:13 PM|
Of course I know what ramen is. It's a type of delicious noodles that are quite cheap and frequently eaten by college students for that reason. Although on the downside it's not very good in providing nutrients, the only keeping many students away from severe malnutrition is the beer that they buy with the money they save on food by eating ramen.
But as to why I used "RAmen". That's because I'm a pastifarian. Much in the way that christians say "Amen", we say "RAmen". If you have any questions about the http://www.venganza.org feel free to ask.
|Posted by: Roncas Nov 16 2006, 08:58 PM|
|Ignor Cyber's preaching... he makes other religions look bad.|
|Posted by: Naruto X13 Nov 17 2006, 03:17 AM|
Hmm... Worshipping a Flying Spaghetti Monster?
Oh my god! It really does make other religions sound bad!!!
|Posted by: Cyber78 Nov 17 2006, 03:50 AM|
|Of course. How can you compete with a religion that has a beer volcano and stripper factory all in the same heaven?|
|Posted by: Itachi Nov 17 2006, 04:22 AM|
| lets stop talking about flying spaghettis.
Anyway, I'll start again.
Name: Itachi Uchiha (I'm wondering if I'm allowed to use this name)
Height: 2 m
Weight: 80 kg
Eye color: brown
Hair color: brown
Itachi was bitten by a werewolf at 7 when he went to a jungle with his dad. His dad saw his son suffuring and tried to put him out of hismisery. Itachi saw his dad pointing the gun at him and ran into the deeper part of the forest. But one bullet got him and left him a sacer on his left shoulder.
Now, Itachi looks at his scar everyday and searches for his father in the jungle to get revenge for trying to kill him. He now doesn't remember his father's face and thinks that all humans look the same. So now he attacks all humans that enters the jungle.
I know it sounds lame but I didn't have enough time to properly think of a good backstory. I'll edit it later if I have a better idea.
|Posted by: Cyber78 Nov 17 2006, 04:23 AM|
|Actually it's a pretty good concept if you ask me. Over time it'd be nice to see it developed a bit more, but it's a good start.|
|Posted by: Naruto X13 Nov 17 2006, 04:26 AM|
|Yeah, it's pretty good. Except the character's name comes from Naruto!|
|Posted by: Cyber78 Nov 17 2006, 04:27 AM|
|You can change the character name if you want, but I hate naruto too much to know any of the character's names.|
|Posted by: Naruto X13 Nov 17 2006, 04:32 AM|
| So you've heard of Naruto? I think it's okay, except the filler episodes.
I'm just guessing, but do you live in America? I want your personal confirmation or denial. Either is fine.
|Posted by: Cyber78 Nov 17 2006, 04:38 AM|
|Yep, I'm here in the good old US. Land of the free, the obese, the brave, and the best pizza in the world.|
|Posted by: Naruto X13 Nov 17 2006, 05:10 AM|
| Okay then, another question.
Do you guys know each other personally (e.g. Roncas, Alaska, Adminbot3000 etc.), or do you just know each other from this forum?
If I'm pushing this a bit too far, please tell me so and I'll immediately stop asking for details concerning your personal life. Sorry for being nosy!
|Posted by: Roncas Nov 17 2006, 05:36 AM|
|I know cyber through the FVZA forums. I think cyber knows the others through a previous FVZA rpg.|
|Posted by: Cyber78 Nov 17 2006, 09:56 PM|
|Yeah, Roncas is a guy from the FVZA forums so we know eachother a bit that way. Alaska and I are old comrades from the old FVZA RPG as Roncas said, and the adminbot is just an alternate account I use for security reasons.|
|Posted by: Alaska Nov 18 2006, 12:12 AM|
|... Cyber. If we allow Werewolves we're going to damn this site.|
|Posted by: Asiant X13 Nov 18 2006, 04:16 AM|
Are you the admin for the main FVZA forum as well, then?
|Posted by: Cyber78 Nov 18 2006, 04:21 AM|
|Nah, that's title goes to Dangovich, who just so happens to be much nicer than I am.|
|Posted by: KJ Crush Nov 18 2006, 06:01 AM|
Not if they are played with some common sense. If the idea dosn't work, then simply get rid of it all together. Maybe even allow a limited amount of Werewolves, like the first 20, and any werewolves from there will have to be infected? Just saying give it a chance.
|Posted by: Jay Nov 19 2006, 02:56 AM|
There's an idea worth developing. Like, there's a limit on the number of original werewolves, and then the number increases by recruiting (infecting). Although, eventually werewolves will be a BIT too powerful if they keep recruiting.
|Posted by: Jay Nov 19 2006, 02:58 AM|
Simple. You can't. Strippers AND beer? In HEAVEN? *joins church* I could imagine what a Youth Group run by you guys would be like.
|Posted by: Asiant X13 Nov 19 2006, 05:07 AM|
I think you're too young to join. *Jay gets kicked in the ass for trying to join the church*
|Posted by: Jay Nov 19 2006, 05:11 AM|
|pffft. like your opinion matters in this. beam me up, god.|
|Posted by: Asiant X13 Nov 19 2006, 05:13 AM|
|Yes, my opinion matters a lot. *Jay gets kicked in the ass twice more*|
|Posted by: Cyber78 Nov 19 2006, 05:16 AM|
| Woah, woah, woah. We Pastafarians are a very peaceful group of believers who accept any new members. We even offer a 30 day guarantee that if you don't like our religion your old God will take you back.
*hands beer to Jay*
|Posted by: Itachi Nov 19 2006, 05:17 AM|
|Yeah! How about you both shut the fuk up before this forum gets turned into yet another FVZA RPG (Faget Verry and Zeong's Argument Role Playing Game)|
|Posted by: Jay Nov 19 2006, 05:19 AM|
|I'm going to ignore the insult and laugh. That was pretty good.|
|Posted by: Asiant X13 Nov 19 2006, 05:20 AM|
|Yeah, that's really good! I didn't know he possessed such intelligence to make up something like that!|
|Posted by: Asiant X13 Nov 19 2006, 05:23 AM|
Is that legal in America? I know for a fact that it isn't here. It's also extremely dangerous especially because...
*Jay drinks beer and goes psycho*
See? Told you!
|Posted by: Roncas Nov 19 2006, 05:23 AM|
|It's legal if you have a fake ID!|
|Posted by: Asiant X13 Nov 19 2006, 05:25 AM|
|But he doesn't have one.|
|Posted by: Cyber78 Nov 19 2006, 05:35 AM|
|*slips ID under the table to Jay*|
|Posted by: Itachi Nov 19 2006, 05:38 AM|
| *Jay chews it out of hand like a gorilla. He then runs around in a circle, clapping his hands above his head.*
Remember? He's turned psycho after drinking the beer.
|Posted by: Jay Nov 19 2006, 05:45 AM|
oh, shut up. i can do my own * actions, thank you very much.
*takes ID from cyber*
|Posted by: Judder Nov 19 2006, 05:46 AM|
|Posted by: Jay Nov 19 2006, 05:50 AM|
don't worry about it. im trying to be mature about this, but it happens a lot in real life.
|Posted by: Itachi Nov 19 2006, 05:52 AM|
But you're too midget-like to be mistaken for a fully grown man! *SWAT Team raids the place, arresting Jay for being too midget*
|Posted by: Cyber78 Nov 19 2006, 05:53 AM|
|I see somebody needs to be touched by His Noodly Appendage.|
|Posted by: Itachi Nov 19 2006, 05:59 AM|
Apologies. However, I must state that the arguments are always started by Jay.
Jay and Asiant X13 used to be really good friends until Jay decided to draw insulting comics about the latter.
|Posted by: Jay Nov 19 2006, 06:01 AM|
| Excuse me, but I believe that this was started on page 2, where I was attacked for expressing my wonder at this new religion.
And no, it started just a little later, when his ego got so big he could not fit through small doorways.
But seriously, I came here to play an RPG, not to be insulted or to have my actions dictated to me.
|Posted by: Cyber78 Nov 19 2006, 06:07 AM|
|Ok let's all just break it up and sing songs or something.|
|Posted by: Templar Nov 19 2006, 06:09 AM|
|A little campfire song anyone?|
|Posted by: Asiant X13 Nov 19 2006, 06:15 AM|
Actually, you're the one who insulted me first (as usual) in the 'Raike Shinoba' topic, when you said I was 'like a huge naruto freak and has overinflated ego'.
Man! I'm beginning to regret telling you about FVZA now. I was suspecting this would happen, but I took the chance anyhow. I was hoping to improve our sour relationship by playing an RPG together, but it turns out that I was sadly mistaken. I was having fun until you came along and insulted me, starting yet another never-ending argument concerning overinflated ego and naruto. It almost seems that our rivalry was predestined, you being almost as intelligent as me.
So, here we are, arguing again. How about we call it a truce, and start again, at least when we're on this forum?
|Posted by: Cyber78 Nov 19 2006, 06:16 AM|
|Alright I said to break it up. Next person to be an arguementive twat gets suspended from the forum for a week.|
|Posted by: Asiant X13 Nov 19 2006, 06:22 AM|
|Yes, sir! *salutes cyber78*|
|Posted by: Jay Nov 20 2006, 12:57 AM|
|Fine by me. I don't like arguing online anyways.|
|Posted by: Asiant X13 Nov 20 2006, 03:33 AM|
| I'm sorry, but I must ask you something.
If you don't like arguing online, why start one at all?
|Posted by: Drunkentiger123 Nov 20 2006, 03:53 AM|
|thats obvious. He doesnt like arguing, but he doesn't lik u more.|
|Posted by: Asiant X13 Nov 20 2006, 03:59 AM|
|Wtf? The question was directed at Jay, not you!|
|Posted by: Drunkentiger123 Nov 20 2006, 06:51 AM|
|this forum is supposed to be used for the RPG, and is definitely not for some petty argument between you and ur friend. Post things that are relevant, or get the hell out, buddy. This goes for that Jay guy as well. Ive read this through, and confirmed that you are the one who started all this. Caling someone a naruto freak is enough to provoke them into doing something very aggressive and stupid so even if this asiant guy is a sissy who likes naruto, try to refrain from mentioning that in public.|
|Posted by: Cyber78 Nov 20 2006, 10:18 PM|
|Ok, now that everybody has made their points I don't want anything else in this thread arguementive. If it concerns the character being introduced then fine, if not then we'll run into some difficulties.|
|Posted by: Drunkentiger123 Nov 21 2006, 03:31 AM|
|righto. got it.|
|Posted by: Templar Nov 24 2006, 05:36 AM|
|I officially welcome you to the forum. Cut this shit though.|