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Title: Itachi Shinoba
Description: brother of Raike Shinoba


Itachi - November 15, 2006 09:48 AM (GMT)
Name: Itachi Shinoba

Age: 15

Occupation: None

Eye Colour: Black

Hair Colour: Black

Height: 167cm

Weight: 57kg


Backstory:

Separated from the rest of the family since babyhood, Itachi Shinoba grew up in an orphanagy. The purpose of the cruel separation was to prevent all members of Shinoba clan from dying out should the other three be found by the Vladikhan.
Since early childhood, Itachi discovered that he possessed unusual talents, such as having perfect aim when playing dodgeball, being much faster and agile than the rest of the kids around him. When he became 10, he met his older brother, Raike, and joined him in his quest to avenge his family. Since then, he has been fighting alongside one of the only two remaining survivors of the Shinoba clan (the other one being himself).

Itachi didn't know his true name until he was found by his brother. One of the things his father had told Raike when passing away was the location of the particular orphanagy and to 'find Itachi, your younger brother'.

Alaska - November 15, 2006 06:50 PM (GMT)
[*Cough naruto spinoff totally unoriginal and bs because noone has any abilities like those cough*

Cyber78 - November 15, 2006 10:19 PM (GMT)
*cough pirates are better cough*

*takes cough meds*

Roncas - November 15, 2006 10:25 PM (GMT)
seriously. this ninja shit is not going to flow right. You are a normal person no special powers or anything. As a vmpire yes you will have increade agility, strength and regeneration. As a human I will understand if you are a great marksman if you character was a hunter as a child and/or joined the military or police force. That is likely but something like "Oh I am a ninja I am born with special abilities." No. Not going to happen. And seeing as your characters are 15, 16 your skills are very limited as a sword fighter, martial artist. Now if I was going to create a melee character this is how it should be.

Age: 27

Backstory: As a child my parents pushed me into taking martial arts. At first I disliked it but after sticking to it I began to enjoy it and excell through my belts. I took several different variants of martial arts at 16 and equally excelled through them. I began learning using weapons with my martial arts and became very proficient. My master was proud of me and taught me some of the old ways yatta yatta.

Yoiu have to earn your abilities to a degree not natural pocess them...

Cyber78 - November 15, 2006 10:38 PM (GMT)
RAmen to that.

I've got to whole heartedly agree, there's no such thing as inheiriting skill. Some people might be a little bit stronger, a little bit taller, or a little less prone to certain diseases based on genetics, but you just don't inheirit skills. Those must be taught.

Roncas - November 15, 2006 10:45 PM (GMT)
Especially with the age that ya'lls characters are you would be exponetially less skilled than the older characters.

Naruto X13 - November 16, 2006 09:41 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Cyber78 @ Nov 15 2006, 10:38 PM)
RAmen to that.

Is it just a typo, or did you deliberately include the word 'ramen' to mock us of creating japanese superhuman characters?

Do you even know what it is?

Naruto X13 - November 16, 2006 09:45 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Roncas @ Nov 15 2006, 10:25 PM)
As a human I will understand if you are a great marksman if you character was a hunter as a child and/or joined the military or police force. That is likely but something like "Oh I am a ninja I am born with special abilities." No. Not going to happen.

So would it be okay if he changed the 'perfect aim' and 'much faster and agile' bits to 'better-than-average aim' and 'slightly faster and agile'?

Some people are born with more athletic bodies, you know...

Naruto X13 - November 16, 2006 09:50 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Roncas @ Nov 15 2006, 10:45 PM)
Especially with the age that ya'lls characters are you would be exponetially less skilled than the older characters.

I agree. But I must point out the fact that we never said our characters are more skilled than yours. We merely stated that our characters are of ninja descent, which makes them faster and more agile compared to other kids of their age.

And what if Raike received special training from his parents from very early childhood? Wouldn't that make his physical prowess surpass an average person's?

Naruto X13 - November 16, 2006 10:01 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Alaska @ Nov 15 2006, 06:50 PM)
*Cough naruto spinoff totally unoriginal and bs because no one has any abilities like those cough*

Which abilities do you mean? The last time I checked, Itachi didn't give his character any special abilities. As I mentioned previously, he just said that Itachi Shinoba has good aim, can run faster and is more agile than other kids of his age.

I would understand if you had posted that in the 'Raike Shinoba' topic, where I said Raike could create illusions of himself and climb cliffs without needing footholds (this is starting to sound lame even to me, I apologise once again for posting such bullshit).

Cyber78 - November 16, 2006 08:13 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Naruto X13 @ Nov 16 2006, 09:41 AM)
QUOTE (Cyber78 @ Nov 15 2006, 10:38 PM)
RAmen to that.

Is it just a typo, or did you deliberately include the word 'ramen' to mock us of creating japanese superhuman characters?

Do you even know what it is?

Of course I know what ramen is. It's a type of delicious noodles that are quite cheap and frequently eaten by college students for that reason. Although on the downside it's not very good in providing nutrients, the only keeping many students away from severe malnutrition is the beer that they buy with the money they save on food by eating ramen.

But as to why I used "RAmen". That's because I'm a pastifarian. Much in the way that christians say "Amen", we say "RAmen". If you have any questions about the The Church of the Flying Spaghetti Monster feel free to ask.

Roncas - November 16, 2006 08:58 PM (GMT)
Ignor Cyber's preaching... he makes other religions look bad.

Naruto X13 - November 17, 2006 03:17 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Cyber78 @ Nov 16 2006, 08:13 PM)
But as to why I used "RAmen". That's because I'm a pastifarian. Much in the way that christians say "Amen", we say "RAmen". If you have any questions about the The Church of the Flying Spaghetti Monster feel free to ask.

Hmm... Worshipping a Flying Spaghetti Monster?

Oh my god! It really does make other religions sound bad!!!

Cyber78 - November 17, 2006 03:50 AM (GMT)
Of course. How can you compete with a religion that has a beer volcano and stripper factory all in the same heaven?

Itachi - November 17, 2006 04:22 AM (GMT)
lets stop talking about flying spaghettis.

Anyway, I'll start again.

Name: Itachi Uchiha (I'm wondering if I'm allowed to use this name)
Age: 27
Height: 2 m
Weight: 80 kg
Eye color: brown
Hair color: brown

Itachi was bitten by a werewolf at 7 when he went to a jungle with his dad. His dad saw his son suffuring and tried to put him out of hismisery. Itachi saw his dad pointing the gun at him and ran into the deeper part of the forest. But one bullet got him and left him a sacer on his left shoulder.

Now, Itachi looks at his scar everyday and searches for his father in the jungle to get revenge for trying to kill him. He now doesn't remember his father's face and thinks that all humans look the same. So now he attacks all humans that enters the jungle.


I know it sounds lame but I didn't have enough time to properly think of a good backstory. I'll edit it later if I have a better idea.

Cyber78 - November 17, 2006 04:23 AM (GMT)
Actually it's a pretty good concept if you ask me. Over time it'd be nice to see it developed a bit more, but it's a good start.

Naruto X13 - November 17, 2006 04:26 AM (GMT)
Yeah, it's pretty good. Except the character's name comes from Naruto!

Cyber78 - November 17, 2006 04:27 AM (GMT)
You can change the character name if you want, but I hate naruto too much to know any of the character's names.

Naruto X13 - November 17, 2006 04:32 AM (GMT)
So you've heard of Naruto? I think it's okay, except the filler episodes.

I'm just guessing, but do you live in America? I want your personal confirmation or denial. Either is fine.

Cyber78 - November 17, 2006 04:38 AM (GMT)
Yep, I'm here in the good old US. Land of the free, the obese, the brave, and the best pizza in the world.

Naruto X13 - November 17, 2006 05:10 AM (GMT)
Okay then, another question.
Do you guys know each other personally (e.g. Roncas, Alaska, Adminbot3000 etc.), or do you just know each other from this forum?

If I'm pushing this a bit too far, please tell me so and I'll immediately stop asking for details concerning your personal life. Sorry for being nosy!

Roncas - November 17, 2006 05:36 AM (GMT)
I know cyber through the FVZA forums. I think cyber knows the others through a previous FVZA rpg.

Cyber78 - November 17, 2006 09:56 PM (GMT)
Yeah, Roncas is a guy from the FVZA forums so we know eachother a bit that way. Alaska and I are old comrades from the old FVZA RPG as Roncas said, and the adminbot is just an alternate account I use for security reasons.

Alaska - November 18, 2006 12:12 AM (GMT)
... Cyber. If we allow Werewolves we're going to damn this site.

Asiant X13 - November 18, 2006 04:16 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Cyber78 @ Nov 17 2006, 09:56 PM)
Alaska and I are old comrades from the old FVZA RPG as Roncas said, and the adminbot is just an alternate account I use for security reasons.

Are you the admin for the main FVZA forum as well, then?

Cyber78 - November 18, 2006 04:21 AM (GMT)
Nah, that's title goes to Dangovich, who just so happens to be much nicer than I am.

KJ Crush - November 18, 2006 06:01 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Alaska @ Nov 18 2006, 12:12 AM)
... Cyber. If we allow Werewolves we're going to damn this site.

Not if they are played with some common sense. If the idea dosn't work, then simply get rid of it all together. Maybe even allow a limited amount of Werewolves, like the first 20, and any werewolves from there will have to be infected? Just saying give it a chance.

Jay - November 19, 2006 02:56 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (KJ Crush @ Nov 18 2006, 06:01 AM)
QUOTE (Alaska @ Nov 18 2006, 12:12 AM)
... Cyber. If we allow Werewolves we're going to damn this site.

Not if they are played with some common sense. If the idea dosn't work, then simply get rid of it all together. Maybe even allow a limited amount of Werewolves, like the first 20, and any werewolves from there will have to be infected? Just saying give it a chance.

There's an idea worth developing. Like, there's a limit on the number of original werewolves, and then the number increases by recruiting (infecting). Although, eventually werewolves will be a BIT too powerful if they keep recruiting.

Jay - November 19, 2006 02:58 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Cyber78 @ Nov 17 2006, 03:50 AM)
Of course. How can you compete with a religion that has a beer volcano and stripper factory all in the same heaven?

Simple. You can't. Strippers AND beer? In HEAVEN? *joins church* I could imagine what a Youth Group run by you guys would be like.

Asiant X13 - November 19, 2006 05:07 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Jay @ Nov 19 2006, 02:58 AM)
QUOTE (Cyber78 @ Nov 17 2006, 03:50 AM)
Of course.  How can you compete with a religion that has a beer volcano and stripper factory all in the same heaven?

Simple. You can't. Strippers AND beer? In HEAVEN? *joins church* I could imagine what a Youth Group run by you guys would be like.

I think you're too young to join. *Jay gets kicked in the ass for trying to join the church*

Jay - November 19, 2006 05:11 AM (GMT)
pffft. like your opinion matters in this. beam me up, god.

Asiant X13 - November 19, 2006 05:13 AM (GMT)
Yes, my opinion matters a lot. *Jay gets kicked in the ass twice more*

Cyber78 - November 19, 2006 05:16 AM (GMT)
Woah, woah, woah. We Pastafarians are a very peaceful group of believers who accept any new members. We even offer a 30 day guarantee that if you don't like our religion your old God will take you back.

*hands beer to Jay*

Itachi - November 19, 2006 05:17 AM (GMT)
Yeah! How about you both shut the fuk up before this forum gets turned into yet another FVZA RPG (Faget Verry and Zeong's Argument Role Playing Game)

Jay - November 19, 2006 05:19 AM (GMT)
I'm going to ignore the insult and laugh. That was pretty good.

Asiant X13 - November 19, 2006 05:20 AM (GMT)
Yeah, that's really good! I didn't know he possessed such intelligence to make up something like that!

Asiant X13 - November 19, 2006 05:23 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Cyber78 @ Nov 19 2006, 05:16 AM)
*hands beer to Jay*

Is that legal in America? I know for a fact that it isn't here. It's also extremely dangerous especially because...

*Jay drinks beer and goes psycho*

See? Told you!

Roncas - November 19, 2006 05:23 AM (GMT)
It's legal if you have a fake ID!

Asiant X13 - November 19, 2006 05:25 AM (GMT)
But he doesn't have one.

Cyber78 - November 19, 2006 05:35 AM (GMT)
*slips ID under the table to Jay*




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