Kaiv, The false prophecy

[Moosey]

Name: Kaiv (pronounced kay-eev)
Age: Four seasons
Gender: Male
Species: Jaguar
Breed: Black Panther Jaguar

Description: Kaiv's jet black fur has strange white markings all over it, making it appear sort of like a giraffe's hide. Kaiv's eyes are dark brown, so much so that they appear black. His fur is uasually unkempt, his massive paws caked with mud. Even mucky, Kaiv does not have bad looks. He also cleans up rather well. He is tall and well built, and of medium weight.
picture: http://animals.timduru.org/dirlist/panther...uar-Panther.jpg

Personality: Extremely arrogant. Kaiv believes that if you want something done right, you must do it yourself. He is powerful and clever, but thinks of others as his pawns or nothing at all. He is often alone. It takes him an extraordinarily long time to grow close to thers, and even longer to trust them and consider them as equals. At times, Kaiv can have a quick temper, but is usually mellow and calm. He likes to think that he can be rather persuasive, but alot of the times, not so much. He is rather brave, and though arrogant his heart is usually in the right place. He is very willing to fight for those who cannot fight for themselves and his own beliefs. When he gets close to asomeone, he grows very, very, very protectecive of them.

History: Born in a low rank in a small jaguar pride, he was immedeatly hailed to be a 'chosen one' because of his markings. He was pampered and spoiled by the small pride. He had many teachers in youth, each trying to teach him how to be the perfect leader. Although as a youngster, Kaiv was quite the brat, all the attention and pressure soon got to him. As he reached adolecence, Kaiv became extremly rebellious often lashing out at his tutors.

Eventually, Kaiv left his pride. The supposed messaiah, the chosen one, up and left the pride he was supposed to lead. Many of the pride members insisted on following Kaiv and forcing to return to his homeland, but no action was taken.

Kaiv wandered alone through his adolecence, the things he had been taught coming in rather handy. As he grew, Kaiv learned to depend on himsef again and to live independantly. In his travels, he learned about a small island and it's story. He first thought that the story was a myth and made up, but the story was so widespread, Kaiv had no choice but to believe it. And now, intrigued, he searches for the island.

[Kitty]

A'ight, I have a few things to say about this bio. The history is slightly short, but I'm going to let that slide.

The personality and description, however, that's a different story. Add a few more sentences or lines in the personality and description, please.
How would he react if someone pushed him alittle too far? Would he fight? Back down? Maybe even run? Just go into alittle more depth there.How is he built? You didn't tell me anything but the colors on him. Is he muscular? Lean?
Just a few pointers. ^^

EXTREMELY sorry about the long wait. Apologies.

[Moosey]

I tend not to be very descriptive with my history things sometimes. I like to basically sum it up and then give out details when I start Rping.

About the other stuff, I guess I was just rushing it for some reason. o__________<
Edited, Yay!

[Kitty]

Yeah, I get sort of like that, too. Yer accepted now, though. Get to roleplayin'!

[Moosey]

Thankee Kindly.