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| missdepp |
Posted: Nov 26 2005, 07:27 PM
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Fred Abberline's Lover ![]() Group: Admin Posts: 892 Member No.: 1 Joined: 15-October 05 |
Jack walked into a bar alone and exhausted. He slumped down on a stool and asked for a bottle of rum.
He swigged it slowly. He sighed. He had every right to feel lousy, he had just been kicked of his ship and it had been taken over... now see if you can carry on and be another character (this is after the movie) |
| BeautifulMidnight |
Posted: Nov 26 2005, 08:39 PM
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Glen's Girl Group: Members Posts: 96 Member No.: 10 Joined: 17-October 05 |
((Can I make up a new character? If not, I'll change my entry))
Celeste, who was new to the town, walked into the bar. There her eyes landed on the most gorgeous man she had ever seen. He had braided hair, adorned with beads, a captains hat, and beautiful deep brown eyes... Tiffany |
| Allie |
Posted: Nov 27 2005, 01:17 AM
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Depp's Babe Group: Members Posts: 243 Member No.: 3 Joined: 16-October 05 |
Bridget was sipping her rum slowly,her eyes fixed on the dark man with the hat who was alone...Her eyes darted upon a woman , who like her was glancing at the man, she had searched for years...
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| missdepp |
Posted: Nov 27 2005, 10:28 AM
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Fred Abberline's Lover ![]() Group: Admin Posts: 892 Member No.: 1 Joined: 15-October 05 |
Yep you can make up characters...
ok... Jack slumped towards a table in the corner and sat down, he swigged down the last of his rum and slammed it down on the table...he saw two women looking at him, he curiously stared back at them. He grinned and put his head on the table and went to sleep...he was so tired... |
| Allie |
Posted: Nov 27 2005, 04:57 PM
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Depp's Babe Group: Members Posts: 243 Member No.: 3 Joined: 16-October 05 |
He merely shrugged and went to sleep... I couldn't take it anymore... I walked over to him and as I moved forward, his smell of rum engulfed me... I thumped him on the back but he didn't wake up...I took his hat off....
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| Allie |
Posted: Nov 27 2005, 05:00 PM
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Depp's Babe Group: Members Posts: 243 Member No.: 3 Joined: 16-October 05 |
Oops that was from Bridget's POV could I do that?
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| missdepp |
Posted: Nov 27 2005, 05:23 PM
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Fred Abberline's Lover ![]() Group: Admin Posts: 892 Member No.: 1 Joined: 15-October 05 |
Don't worry about it
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| missdepp |
Posted: Nov 29 2005, 05:34 PM
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Fred Abberline's Lover ![]() Group: Admin Posts: 892 Member No.: 1 Joined: 15-October 05 |
Jack opened his eyes, someone had taken his beloved hat off. He lifted his head up from the table and a sight met his eyes which caused him to choke...
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| Allie |
Posted: Nov 29 2005, 06:54 PM
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Depp's Babe Group: Members Posts: 243 Member No.: 3 Joined: 16-October 05 |
Jack started to choke when he saw me, and I bewildered, tapped him hard on the back.. I didn't want him to die, not here in the pub,anyway!! He stopped choking and his eyes watery , and his red face with all the choking, looked questioningly at me... I blurted it out right away...."I guess you know a woman named Marina, don't you?"
-Bridget |
| missdepp |
Posted: Dec 3 2005, 08:39 AM
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Fred Abberline's Lover ![]() Group: Admin Posts: 892 Member No.: 1 Joined: 15-October 05 |
Jack stared at Bridget. "No i don't think i do," He grunted.
He got up and pushed past her. He went to the bar to get another drink. "Leave me alone," He shouted at her. |
| Allie |
Posted: Dec 3 2005, 10:39 AM
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Depp's Babe Group: Members Posts: 243 Member No.: 3 Joined: 16-October 05 |
I cocked an eyebrow.. He was causing a scene and didn't want him to embarass me but for the sake of my mother.. I didn't want to let him go. I sauntered over to him. "Marina, blue eyes, long velvety hair, that night at the dock remember?"
-Bridget |
| missdepp |
Posted: Dec 3 2005, 11:31 AM
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Fred Abberline's Lover ![]() Group: Admin Posts: 892 Member No.: 1 Joined: 15-October 05 |
Jack refused to listen to things he thought he'd forgotten about...he turned away from bridget and ran out of the bar...
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| Allie |
Posted: Dec 3 2005, 11:35 AM
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Depp's Babe Group: Members Posts: 243 Member No.: 3 Joined: 16-October 05 |
Jack ran out of the bar... I felt tears sprang into my eyes.. I couldn't believe it. First, my mother died then he walks out on me.. I followed him into the night, determined to talk to him! The street was deserted but I trudged along hoping to meet him, even if I had to walk all the dark alleys alone. Suddenly, I heard something and a dirty hand covered my mouth , stifling my screams. I fought but it seemed in vain
-Bridget P.S Hiya Becky!! |
| missdepp |
Posted: Dec 3 2005, 11:38 AM
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Fred Abberline's Lover ![]() Group: Admin Posts: 892 Member No.: 1 Joined: 15-October 05 |
Jack took his hand away from Bridgets mouth.
"Leave me alone ok! Go back to wear you came from and leave me alone!" He walked off into the night and hoped that he never had to see her again hey allie |
| Allie |
Posted: Dec 3 2005, 11:47 AM
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Depp's Babe Group: Members Posts: 243 Member No.: 3 Joined: 16-October 05 |
I ran after him...tears now trickled down my face....."Please Dad!!" I called...
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