A Collocutor's Curriculum, The Introduction
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A Collocutor's Curriculum, The Introduction| BLAZEONE |
Posted: Dec 28 2005, 06:59 PM
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XL Private First Class  Group: Members Posts: 44 Member No.: 419 Joined: 28-December 05  |
Collating complex concepts, it's the clever collocutor
Demolishing deviant demonstrators, verbal decapitator Grabbing the mic, don't matter you wanna battle or fight Whatever dog, either way taking a chance with your life Oh yes I’m savage alright, and not the passivist type So bring your brethren, you can't handle the adrenaline Spit on melodies so eloquent, wanna talk we can settle it Think I’m kidding you; I bring the 'chronicles of ridicule’ Spittin’ syllables to get rid of you little fools with minuscule Come dissin who? We react like chemicals to finish you The individual spittin’ truth a rhythmical, scientific flow You ass munches lack substance, rhymes with wack punches In fact I know everything I’ma get, like I packed lunches So I bend you in half and laugh as your back crunches Inaudible intellect, before steppin u better evlevate Fuck David Blane I levitate at 3 feet, and meditate N freestyle in a mental state while set to devastate These fake herbs, I’ll bring your doom like Metal Face A heavyweight, and bet I've been active for months With a closed fist in my briefcase, I’m packin a punch |
 
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| Xiaolin Disciple |
Posted: Dec 28 2005, 08:15 PM
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XL Swat Leader  Group: V.I.P. Posts: 544 Member No.: 125 Joined: 14-October 05 |
Grabbing the mic, don't matter you wanna battle or fight
Whatever dog, either way taking a chance with your life - ooh nice In fact I know everything I’ma get, like I packed lunches - funny These fake herbs, I’ll bring your doom like Metal Face - nice A heavyweight, and bet I've been active for months With a closed fist in my briefcase, I’m packin a punch - nice way to end it great intro 9/10 |
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| BLAZEONE |
Posted: Dec 28 2005, 08:30 PM
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XL Private First Class Group: Members Posts: 44 Member No.: 419 Joined: 28-December 05 |
Thanks.
Uppin'.. |
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| Soul Taker |
Posted: Dec 30 2005, 05:41 PM
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XL Soldier Elite Group: V.I.P. Posts: 366 Member No.: 78 Joined: 11-October 05 |
well i'll start by saying you've got your multi's {word} in check,your
vocab was sweet,even your contents were above par,your wordplay was creative,all in all you showed good imagination,another thing that caught my eye was your line lengths,this helped your rhyme to flow easyier............8/10....peace.. |
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