Soul Taker v Garfield..

6-8 Bars..
first to 3 or 5 to win..
house rules..

check in friend..and i'll spit 1st..

Were and how do i check in

lol...it's cool Bro,you just have by posting in this thread...

ok..

i'll lyricaly "rip you"/ if you choose 2 battle this verbal acrobat/ i'll
be like a "child on christmas day"/ cuz from here on KAT/ i'll make
sure i "destroy your {w}raps"//
shit i must be "walking around in flamming shoe's"/ cuz i'm always
leaving "hot tracks"/ it'll be wise for you not to "show up"/ like the
"facial hair on GINGER CATS"// **
Garfield rippin you 4 me is routine/ you might be "iLL"/ but bitch i'm
your "vaccine"/ your so "dumb" you think "diarrhoea is hereditary"/
cuz it "runs in your jeans"//
Soul spits lyrics with vigour/ my "tongue" acts like a "shaky finga on
an air trigger"/ Garfield think your rhymes are "phat"/ bitch i'll make
"slimfast" like "stick figures"//
read on KAT/ i'll smash your ass with raps/ that'll leave you leakin real
slowly/"crucify you" with rhymes that are on "point" like "nails"/ so you'll
know what it is 2 be"holy"//
then lay you flat at 180-degree angle/ my verses are know to maim 'n'
mangle/shit i got this battle "locked up"/ like a set of "shackles around
a convicts ankles"//

**=cats as in ppl.....lol..{just for thous}

Whats this Soul Taker i wake up to find you be dissin me/ I also find e-mails from your girl saying shes missin me/

But seriously/ All that bullshit you wrote is irrelevant/ You tried to serve me but all you served to show was your lack of intelligence/

You've read 2 bars and your already regretting this battle/ Got this bitch shaking like a baby playing with his rattle/

Forget it Soul im taking all the rep that you have/ Im C.I.A. ill Sam Fischer snipe your cranial cav/

Let me tell you readers something Soul Taker regrets this/ I know/ Because he begged me not to reply through a private message/

Dont feel bad Soul you were just unlucky b / Im like a fag with Aids coz aint no one wanna FUCK WID ME!!!

So step up Soul/ And ill put 16 in your frame and brain/ Let slugs levitate you like you was David Blaine.

I play the game/ And i diss you all jokingly/ But after this battle even you know your gunna vote for me.

Upping Both Verses ppl...

Come On People VOTE On This.........

I think we going to have to kinda advertise it in other posts Soul just like tell people to vote in other threads what you think?

lol....agreed friend,but i've already started by putting a a link in my sig,
but yeah we'll have to start posting in other threads too by the looks of
things.........peace..

aight i'm going to vote

i kinda hesitated because you two seem cool to me
but this is a battle so i'll put up the first vote

soul taker

Garfield rippin you 4 me is routine/ you might be "iLL"/ but bitch i'm
your "vaccine"/ your so "dumb" you think "diarrhoea is hereditary"/
cuz it "runs in your jeans"// - 8

Garfield think your rhymes are "phat"/ bitch i'll make
"slimfast" like "stick figures"// - 8

"crucify you" with rhymes that are on "point" like "nails"/ so you'll
know what it is 2 be"holy"// - 9

(not a diss but a good line though)
shit i got this battle "locked up"/ like a set of "shackles around
a convicts ankles"// 8

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garfield

Let me tell you readers something Soul Taker regrets this/ I know/ Because he begged me not to reply through a private message/ - (nice) 9

Im like a fag with Aids coz aint no one wanna FUCK WID ME!!!
- (this is a line i'm iffy about "fag" got my eye brow raised) - 6

And i diss you all jokingly/ But after this battle even you know your gunna vote for me - 7

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garfield, there wasn't enough lines i could find that was good enough to slay soul with but great effort though. keep coming up with lines that i picked out and you'll do fine in the next battle.

my vote is for soul

My votes for Soul Taker...Garfields just felt a little too generic, Soul Taker put more effort into his I think.

soul taker

wow,thanks for voting ppl....respect for taking the time out....peace.

Garfield thanks for the battle friend,respect....peace.

This is a good piece.

Both came up good.

Soul Taker :

i'll lyricaly "rip you"/ if you choose 2 battle this verbal acrobat/ i'll
be like a "child on christmas day"/ cuz from here on KAT/ i'll make
sure i "destroy your {w}raps"//
shit i must be "walking around in flamming shoe's"/ cuz i'm always
leaving "hot tracks"/ it'll be wise for you not to "show up"/ like the
"facial hair on GINGER CATS"// **


~ Destroy your wraps ? I rip your raps would have been more understandable.

Walking around in flamming shoes - hot track - Dope.

I like that line.

Garfield rippin you 4 me is routine/ you might be "iLL"/ but bitch i'm
your "vaccine"/ your so "dumb" you think "diarrhoea is hereditary"/
cuz it "runs in your jeans"//
Soul spits lyrics with vigour/ my "tongue" acts like a "shaky finga on
an air trigger"/ Garfield think your rhymes are "phat"/ bitch i'll make
"slimfast" like "stick figures"//


~ Not bad but would have been better for an audio purpose.

slowly/"crucify you" with rhymes that are on "point" like "nails"/ so you'll
know what it is 2 be"holy"//
then lay you flat at 180-degree angle/ my verses are know to maim 'n'
mangle/shit i got this battle "locked up"/ like a set of "shackles around
a convicts ankles"//


~ Not really diggin' this.

* Soul Taker : You got good lines but would have fit better in an audio.

By the way, your lines are a little lenghty.

GARF13LD :

Whats this Soul Taker i wake up to find you be dissin me/ I also find e-mails from your girl saying shes missin me/

~ LOL. Good one, if it is true otherwise it would have been lame given that you don't know that your opponent has a girlfriend . Nonetheless, a good one.

But seriously/ All that bullshit you wrote is irrelevant/ You tried to serve me but all you served to show was your lack of intelligence/


~ Nice one.

You've read 2 bars and your already regretting this battle/ Got this bitch shaking like a baby playing with his rattle/


~ Nah.

Let me tell you readers something Soul Taker regrets this/ I know/ Because he begged me not to reply through a private message/

~ Nice one but it didn't quite rhymed but nice line.

Dont feel bad Soul you were just unlucky b / Im like a fag with Aids coz aint no one wanna FUCK WID ME!!!

~ Overused line but still it's nice, they never user " fag " though, lol.

So step up Soul/ And ill put 16 in your frame and brain/ Let slugs levitate you like you was David Blaine.


~ Okay, not really into guns lines.


play the game/ And i diss you all jokingly/ But after this battle even you know your gunna vote for me.

~ Nice closing and I had a similar line as that once, LOL.

Vote : GARF13LD.

Peace.

^yeah but it would've lost the wordplay if he'd used rip twice...^


soultaker got this, jsut better wordplay n punches etc

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