colabo verse, feedback plz
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colabo verse, feedback plz| S.O.S |
Posted: Dec 15 2005, 12:49 PM
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XL Rookie  Group: Members Posts: 15 Member No.: 359 Joined: 29-November 05  |
this is a verse for a colab with somone i know....
tell me wot u think cheers I only roll with evil-sinners who love to kill ‘real’-‘pretenders’/ I leave you bleeding in pools like menstruating female swimmers/ I hada team, but they were jealous of my talent, I flow solo/ You a known homo so I break up your team like yoko ono/ Rhymes like tides, my sounds swell/ My lyrics like a bitch who don’t suck dick, they don’t go down well/ People run from me like ima terrorist alarm scare/ And most rappers story’s more fabricated than arm chairs/ I made statues of my enemies and they still weren’t hard haters/ These emcees beating me is a ‘tall order’ like large waiters/ your rhymes irrelevant like old prayers/ Yall fakers are sub par like bad golf players/ I spit as fast as instants and help you make hospital visits/ Don’t argue and show me your point coz ill stab you with it/ Aim at me in ill taint your speech and lame your peeps/ I was alone in the playground, people know not to play with me/ |
 
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| GARF13LD |
Posted: Dec 15 2005, 04:33 PM
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XL Soldier Elite  Group: V.I.P. Posts: 171 Member No.: 142 Joined: 17-October 05 |
I hada team, but they were jealous of my talent, I flow solo/
You a known homo so I break up your team like yoko ono/ Rhymes like tides, my sounds swell/ My lyrics like a bitch who don’t suck dick, they don’t go down well/ People run from me like ima terrorist alarm scare/ And most rappers story’s more fabricated than arm chairs/ Yall fakers are sub par like bad golf players/ I love these lines there ill you should get in the battle section you would cause many upsets lol when you lay this track let me know i wanna hear this, keep it up man  |
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| S.O.S |
Posted: Dec 15 2005, 04:37 PM
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XL Rookie Group: Members Posts: 15 Member No.: 359 Joined: 29-November 05 |
cheers for the feedback, itsa txt track, would be an auido but i havnt got a mic, ill post the txt track wen my mans finished with it.
yea i used to battl eloads, thats where i started, then started doin songs, ill post a couple songs up...i aint battled in ages though now, ill try n get bk into it... any more feedback?... |
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| Xiaolin Disciple |
Posted: Dec 15 2005, 06:37 PM
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XL Swat Leader Group: V.I.P. Posts: 544 Member No.: 125 Joined: 14-October 05 |
I only roll with evil-sinners who love to kill ‘real’-‘pretenders’/
I leave you bleeding in pools like menstruating female swimmers - whoa so I break up your team like yoko ono - so true, creative And most rappers story’s more fabricated than arm chairs - funny Don’t argue and show me your point coz ill stab you with it - nice 8/10 strong delivery punch lines are on point (so dont' stab me with it  ) |
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