Piper The Dark Angel

[DarkAngel]

Name: Piper
Age: 15yrs old
Gender: female
Species/Race: Dark Angel
Skills/Abilities: telepathic, dark magic, can control lighting and thunder, fighting skills, flying skills, and healing powers.
Weapon: sword of death and life.
Background/Biography: When she was young, she was a good angel and tried to do everything right, but one day she found a young guy that was injured so she healed him but she didn't know that he was evil, she fell in love with him, but he left her for dead when he tried to kill her; he left a scar deep in heart turning her into a dark angel, and now she lives a life of hatred and sadness because of her long lost love....
Strengths: water, blood, and the dark.
Weaknesses: the cold.
Appearance:(Posted Image)
Cannon Character: Riho Yamazaki (off of Nightwalker)
(Posted Image)

This post has been edited by DarkAngel on Nov 28 2005, 08:17 AM

[InuyashaMinigh]

Very good. If you check your spelling and wording then I think that I might approve it. And I don't know if you saw it or not but you can also have cannon characters.

[DarkAngel]

There i think i fixed it, did I? Oh what exactly is a cannon character?

[InuyashaMinigh]

It is a character like Link or Zelda ya know copy right characters.

[DarkAngel]

oh okay i understand it now...ill have riho for my cannon character she is off of Nightwalker...

This post has been edited by DarkAngel on Nov 26 2005, 11:48 PM

[Deku Baba]

This sounds like an interesting character, but I would like to suggest checking the grammar in Word's grammatik. There was one sentence that seemed to be at least two sentences and thusly needs to be revised. Other than that, it's pretty good.

[DarkAngel]

there how about now i copied it and pasted it on microsoft works word processor and i then checked the grammer and i corrected the mistake that had being made then i copied it again after a checked it and pasted it back on this site...so how dose it look to you now?

[InuyashaMinigh]

Perfect *stamp* approved now you are able to enter the RPG arinas *doors open**shiny light shins* now don't go blind ya hear :din: