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Man Skank - December 5, 2007 03:31 AM (GMT)
If I could go back to the times when I was happy,

The times when we were complete,

The times when it was carefree,

The times of which we no longer speak.



If I could go back to my only true home,

The place where we were family,

The place where we played,

The place of my childhood,

The place where there was hope.



I would lie in my room for hours on end,

I would drive the golf cart around every bend,

I would walk through the woods and admire the trees,

I would fly off the swing and land of my feet.



If I could go back to when nothing was wrong,

I would stop this all from happening and we would be strong.


Capt. Planet - December 5, 2007 03:39 AM (GMT)
Very well done.

Grate Oracle Lewot - December 5, 2007 04:30 AM (GMT)
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...We're you complaining about people who have the attitude that this poem expresses?

Capt. Planet - December 5, 2007 04:52 AM (GMT)
He doesn't complain about nostalgia.

Grate Oracle Lewot - December 5, 2007 10:22 PM (GMT)
Irrelevant.

Capt. Planet - December 6, 2007 03:43 AM (GMT)
The poem seemed nostalgic to me

Grate Oracle Lewot - December 6, 2007 11:42 PM (GMT)
It was. But he was complaining about people like me who wish they were little kids again. I don't remember when exactly, but on MSN.

Man Skank - December 8, 2007 05:22 PM (GMT)
I don't want to be a kid again. I want to go back to where I used to live. That is what its about.

BlueKara - December 8, 2007 05:26 PM (GMT)
Brilliant.

Lewot quit whining.

BlueKara - December 9, 2007 03:06 AM (GMT)
QUOTE
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Quit moving it damn you.




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