for my web comic...., The co main character

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Michael the main character. I like this drawing style it is a bit more cartoony than i am used to but oh well. Tintreas will be doing the story for right now. sorry again guys for the neg space but whenever I try to resize it it still ends up big....

well, for future reference, it'd look better without the green.

ok it was the only color i could like with it though.

*doublepost, sorry X( *

This post has been edited by Resara on Jun 12 2007, 01:41 PM

try to just have a little bit of green around the character, where it looks good, but the whole page hurts my eyes...

Also, you don't want the resize tool to get rid of whitespace, you want the crop tool.

Keep at it, man. :)

(Also, I think this belongs in the beginner section)

you're probly right.... and the crop tool? Im sorry i used photoshop for the bg but besides that I don't use it much....so ill try and find the crop tool!

I think many of us here had already voiced our opinions regarding the fluro green b/g you have there... so yeah, I'm not saying it's terrible, but be aware of your colour co-ordination and the safety of other people's eyes the next time, =).

I don't think it's fair to move this thread until I've received xfactorlight's consent and letting him know why his work should be moved to the Beginner Section.

So, to be quite honest here (listen up now); I believe you've still got some edges you need polished before you can truly post in the Intermediate Gallery. i.e; there's that small issue with the slightly dodgy anatomy and CG skills overall.

You're getting there, but just not quite there yet. Just a little more practice and I'm sure you'll qualify in a jiffy. That I'm sure of, =).

Just my personal opinion though; so, any thoughts, xfactorlight?


EDIT: And regarding any cropping issues; it's not that hard to remember to do said deed; and must I say, cropping is one of the most crucial process in finalising a finished piece...

Anyway, I think the 'Crop' feature is under 'Edit'.

(I don't have photoshop with me right now to double-check the accuracy of my statement, dumb school computers. But you get my point, it's up there somewhere.)

you may move it... my next pic... I think im going to post it in wips to get the critiqueing on the line art and go from there. Its really cool.