What does your new pic look like so far??, making it again <:

[Springs]

What kinda paints are those? They look kinda like either oils or acrylics.

I hate acrylics btw. Worst paint I've ever used.

[red]

:sigh: They're acrylics...

Oils are way better, so I've heard.

lulz so I wanna do one of those 'draw this again' things, but nothing I've drawn a long time ago is interesting, and if it is, I can't draw it any better now.
fail

[Springs]

Oils are definitely better, however I steer clear of traditional oils that use harmful materials, I go full water mixable. Technology, I tell you.

You can do several draw again pictures, so you can see a gradual progression instead of just old and new. I've felt like doing one too but I have no time lol.

[red]

I've been exhausted with all this 'serious' work I've been busting my head against lately, so I decided to doodle something in my old style.

Therefore, HUZZAH! Ellen, Zera's character
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Damn my sketching is dirty.

[Springs]

I have to leave for class soon so I can't do a redline (I would if I could), so I'll have to write down the crit instead. I'll do a redline later.

Her lower leg is really, really short. Her thighs are much longer than they are, normally thighs aren't that long, they're normally slightly shorter than the lower leg.

Her feet are tiny, should enlarge them. Her waist area is also a little static, since it seems like one side is going up, try having one side of her waist/hips be bending more with cloth folds and such. Her arms and hands are also a little too small, extend her arms until the hands reach slightly (very slightly) past the crotch area, and reduce the size of her head a tad.

I hope I don't sound like I'm ragging on you, lol. It's just how I've learned to crit from school. A red line would probably get my point across easier though.

[Zeratanus]

Hi Red! ALSO - *Swoon*

Dammnit imma have to do something with Dreadlock sometime. Now i feel bad...